"It all depend on how you look at it"
Terezin is full of beauty.
It’s in your eyes now clear
And through the street the tramp
Of many marching feet I hear
In the ghetto at Terezin,
It’s in your eyes now clear
And through the street the tramp
Of many marching feet I hear
In the ghetto at Terezin,
It looks that way to me,
Is a square kilometer of earth
Cut off from the world that’s free.
Is a square kilometer of earth
Cut off from the world that’s free.
Death, after all, claims everyone,
You find it everywhere.
It catches up with even those
Who wear their noses in the air.
You find it everywhere.
It catches up with even those
Who wear their noses in the air.
Hey Vanessa. You were very specific with the topic of death and and grief with what you had on your butterfly. Although you were spot on with that topic, it became redundant once I had read about it several times. Though your butterfly is good and relates to the poem, you don't talk about the hope of the author's situation much at all. You represented it as half of your butterfly, but only have tag for it. In my opinion, you should have done more to explain why you had that there. Otherwise, I think the "double butterfly" is a great idea, and your symbols on the butterfly look really good.
ReplyDeleteHi, I really love how your butterfly looks. From just looking at you butterfly I can see it is going to have a lot about death. I also like how you explained why you put your drawings it makes it easy to understand. I noticed that the green dots explain why you did what you did, the red dots is for the poetry analysis. One thing you can fix is it o focus more on hope I see how you have a piece of hope but in my opinion I think you should even it out. Though I believe your butterfly is very good.
ReplyDeleteHey Vanessa, I liked the way that you explained the topic of death because you were really especific of what it was about. You're butterfly looks great I really liked the way you created it with the paper. Also that you put cardboard under it so it would have a support and be more strong. Although your butterfly looks good I believe that you could explain a little bit more about the hope of the author. Overall your butterfly looks great.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on your butterfly! You symbolize death a lot so I was able to know your poem would be about death. Your butterfly looks really good though, it's pretty neat & organized. You did a good job on giving quotes for each tag. I also noticed you included one of your sides is a certain color which was good. Overall, I think you did a great job!
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